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For :iconbionic-hobo: *bionic-hobo

Making it the style from Forge, and since they are assassins, i will tell you why i put them in that; well i wanted Samstar to be an assassin in the first place with Vee, but then when i talked with bionic-hobo, she told me that she wanted to do Feral as a Warden and Mak as a Shaman, so i was like, 'i should put her as a huntress', and so i did and the art looks foul, so i put Samstar back as an Assassin (plus, bionic-hobo putted Feral and Mak as Wardens) I was happy for that part, because i wanted these two as Assassins.

So i hope you like it darling~ ^^

Sorry for the long wait ^^;

Anyways
Vee the Primal Hedgehog (right) :iconbelongsplz: :iconbionic-hobo: *bionic-hobo
Samstar the Hedgehog (left) :iconbelongsplz: ME :icondoggshort2: *Doggshort2

Her part:

And i will put in a critique comment to let people speak on their opinions ^^

See ya ^^
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Let's her started:.. The skin within the mouth and nose shoudl be a little shorter, the eyes should be bigger and larger, the chest should be larger and hands really bigger, it is just a proportion problem <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":p" title=":p (Lick)"/> I suggest you to see some sonic Sa style pics on google and take proportions from him or else you could see some awesome artists that i could list you <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/> oh also the shoes should be bigger. It is original, shading is awesome and I like the background.. The thing you have to improve on is the character and his anatomy.. I mean you should make a Sonic style pic with sonic proportions as you are drawing sonic fcs xD I like the color and all... you have to improve alot but I am sure you will!! Keep improving! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>